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Latest Flash Reviews
Graphics: 85/100
By far the best graphics I have seen from you. The explosions where a nice touch. However, during one fight scene when you had the characters turn invisible do to how fast they were moving (at least that is what I am guessing). It might have helped to still keep those explosions in it to show they where still fighting. I first thought that you where doing some panning to the fight.
Audio: 100/100
Good quality sound and sound effects.
Storyline: 20/200
No storyline, however you said that it was mainly just a fight scene. Also, there was very little innovation in the fight scene itself
Replay Value: 75/100
It was a really interesting fight to watch. I did not find any Easter eggs or like extra stuff. You know what you might want to do since you seem like you now want to help others do sprite animations. Is do a commentary for your movies.
Overall score: 280/500 = 56/100
Gave you a 4/5 on the submission vote.
I liked the fight scene itself, however that is all it was so I could not give you a good overall review. You did warn people about this before hand so I still gave you a good score on the submission vote. And I am looking forward to watching SF Series.
Author's Response:
Thanks man....for the review...can't wait for ur review on SF Series
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when I could understand what the characters where saying
Graphics: 85/100
Your graphics where good, clean and crisp. However, I thought the movie would look better if you did the whole thing in color. Apart from that there is really not much more one could do to improve the graphics.
Audio: 65/100
Your audio on the over hand could use a lot of improvement. First the voices talked a just a tad bit fast, and make it hard, at least for me whom is not use to the Australian "accent," to understand. So, next time slow it down just a tab bit. Second, the recording is not clear, and is fuzzy. Third, the sound effects are crisper and do not need to be as loud as the voices; because in the movie they were actually louder then the voices. Otherwise, the sound was in sink and the sound effects where put to good use.
Storyline: 75/100
Not bad for a comedy, not exactly my kind of comedy, but I could follow the story line along.
Humor: 90/100
You had some pretty funny stuff. However, some of the jokes one could see coming, but overall pretty good.
Replay value: 90/100
To listen to the jokes again I would watch this a couple of times. One thing that could have made this better is have an easter egg in there somewhere and announce it to your viewers that somewhere there is an easter egg in the movie.
Overall score: 405/500 = 81/100
I gave you a 4/5
Very nice I liked enough to where I am going to have to watch your other stuff. If you can find a way to improve the sound quality you would have a solid nine star flash, which from me is hard to get.
Author's Response:
Cheers for the review. About the audio, we got a new microphone which is alot better so the future episodes would have a better sound quality.
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Graphics: 15/100
Nothing really impressive with the graphics. Next time try adding some backround photos if you are like me and cannot draw.
Audio: 60/100
The audio wasn't bad; however, once you turned the sound off you could not turn it back on.
Fun Value: 10/100
It is not a back ideal to try something small for you first time; however, I will not go easy on the review just because it may be your first flash game. Having said that the reason why I gave you a low score is because it's a maze, and what's more is you can touch the walls up to half way. Also, you can right click and then left click to move the ball to the finish.
Innovation: 10/100
Really nothing new as you told me in your message; however you did have that weird question at the end. So, maybe this is the start of a brain teaser type of game, like Wario Ware.
Replay Value: 0/100
I am sorry but there is nothing here to back me want to play this game again.
Overall score: 95/500 = 19/100
I gave you a score of 1/5
Like I said before, it is a good ideal to take things small in the beginning, then gradually learn how to make better games. So, do not be disappointed by the low score take it as a learning experience and press on.
"You must be a common scholar afore you can be a oncommon one, I should hope!" -- Joe from "Great Expectations" by Charles Dickens
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Latest Audio Reviews
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"Out of all your songs this is my personal favorite"
I don't know why (it might be the beat), but it just is. So, I thought I should tell you that it.
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